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JJH--Judy
JJH--Judy is 80% done
I feel like the beginning of the book started off with a very “eloquent” and “deep” feel. As the book moved on, some of the dialogue seems so modern, it doesn’t feel like the same story
Aug 23, 2025 10:03AM
Ruined Wings (Severed Flames, #1)

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JJH--Judy
JJH--Judy is 80% done
The king acts like a stupid frat boy sometimes
Aug 23, 2025 10:17AM
Ruined Wings (Severed Flames, #1)


JJH--Judy
JJH--Judy is 75% done
Definitely don’t care for the MFC much
It’s an insta lust fated mate much more than romance. I feel a strong disconnect between the relationship side of the plot and the action/suspense. She was “innocent” at the beginning of the book. It would make make sense if she had previous experience
Aug 23, 2025 09:21AM
Ruined Wings (Severed Flames, #1)


JJH--Judy
JJH--Judy is 65% done
MFC is kind of whiney. She is so strong at times, but vulnerable which is fine, but the complaining is annoying
Aug 22, 2025 07:13PM
Ruined Wings (Severed Flames, #1)


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