sophie’s Reviews > Before We Were > Status Update
sophie
is 37% done
i don’t think this book had an editor. there are so many moments where a scene contradicts itself. for example: chapter 31, nate was shirtless when he arrived in the kitchen and then the next 2 page state he’s in a shirt? there was no transition to him slipping a shirt on.
very weird and really disrupts the flow of the story which is a bummer considering how well the yearning and inner dialogues are
— Aug 26, 2025 02:50AM
very weird and really disrupts the flow of the story which is a bummer considering how well the yearning and inner dialogues are
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sophie’s Previous Updates
sophie
is 71% done
realized the last example i gave wasn’t a good one so here’s another: nate says he didn’t know about the blackmail, yet a few chapters back nora literally tells him about the blackmail
— Sep 04, 2025 02:49AM
sophie
is 6% done
very descriptive, often repeating the same things and the dialogue seems to be lacking a little
but so far liking it (i love books that are descriptive)
— Aug 18, 2025 11:34PM
but so far liking it (i love books that are descriptive)
