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Also, I’m listening to it instead of reading it. The female isn’t bad but she reads it in a way that makes me hate the female character more. She doesn’t make her more likable. She reads it in a little bit of a quivering voice. And the male is generally good, but the moans/sexy noises are not sexy! They are laughable.
Aug 26, 2025 10:42AM
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let me just rage for a minute. This woman is such an unsympathetic character, I almost can’t stand her or empathize with her situation. Her boyfriend is so far not the bad guy & she does all that to him? I don’t find it erotic, it’s despicable. Maybe detail will be given & he’s a bad guy but she doesn’t know that right now & that does not give her a pass to act like a spineless teenage girl!
Aug 26, 2025 10:36AM
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