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Note to author: the use of “flashback” and “end flashback” in chapter 9 is unnecessary.
I’m about ready to DNF. There is zero chemistry between the characters. They aren’t even rivals. The nerds intense hatred towards the other is just stupid.
— Aug 27, 2025 08:08AM
I’m about ready to DNF. There is zero chemistry between the characters. They aren’t even rivals. The nerds intense hatred towards the other is just stupid.
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Note to author: there are some lines at the very end of chapter 3 that are a convo between you and your editor, I am assuming. Hope this isn’t repeated throughout the book.
— Aug 26, 2025 09:41PM
