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Isabella
is on page 290 of 400
the author doesn’t seem to know how go progress the plot naturally so just has some dude die for no reason so the FMC can have sex with one of the MMC’s in a grief induced drunk rage
like the writing isn’t bad but the pacing is ATROCIOUS
— Aug 29, 2025 04:55AM
like the writing isn’t bad but the pacing is ATROCIOUS
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Isabella
is on page 311 of 400
LUCINDA DARK HIM EATING HER OUT, SAVING UP PUSSY JUICES IN HIS MOUTH AND THEN (WITHOUT WARNING) SPITTING THEM INTO HER MOUTH SHOULDVE BEEN IN THE TRIGGER LIST SO I COULDVE AVOIDED THE PHYSICAL HORROR I WENT THROUGH READING THAT
— Aug 29, 2025 05:57AM
Isabella
is 46% done
the premise is interesting, the story relatively well written, but fucking NOTHING is happening
— Aug 28, 2025 01:10AM

