M.P. Conn’s Reviews > White Pines > Status Update
M.P. Conn
is 66% done
I´m a little disappointed. The story in itself is good, the writing also, but the author just goes on, and on, and on with pages of descriptions about the main characters thoughts and feelings. I want action, dialogues, things happening, but I´m not seeing any of this. This is the main reason I became an author myself, to not have to keep reading novels with endless descriptions.
— Aug 31, 2025 10:47PM
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