Amanda’s Reviews > Fate of the Sun King > Status Update
Amanda
is 56% done
Aw man, my very fun trainwreck of a series has become just a straight up trainwreck it seems :(
These have been bad since the start but I was having so much fun up until maybe 30% thru this one. It started off great but quickly had a shift in writing style around 30% mark now it's cringe and reads rly poorly & clunky. Makes me wonder if that first bit is from a different draft & the rest was rushed or something.
— Sep 02, 2025 01:14AM
These have been bad since the start but I was having so much fun up until maybe 30% thru this one. It started off great but quickly had a shift in writing style around 30% mark now it's cringe and reads rly poorly & clunky. Makes me wonder if that first bit is from a different draft & the rest was rushed or something.
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