Imogen’s Reviews > The Girl in 6E > Status Update
Imogen
is on page 8 of 352
authors should learn how to write exposition without just writing "this is my name and my backstory and this is how i real about it" in a series of paragraphs. that would be cool i think
— Sep 02, 2025 09:59AM
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Imogen
is 17% done
torre really sat down to write this book and said "how can i be transphobic, homophobic, misogynistic, stigmatizing to people with serious mental illnesses, and sound as dumb as possible in 350 short, poorly written pages"
— Sep 02, 2025 11:19AM
Imogen
is 12% done
torre seems to have shockingly little empathy for sex workers. why she thought she had the competency to write this book is beyond me
— Sep 02, 2025 10:32AM
Imogen
is 12% done
is it really so hard to pick one tense and stick to it? especially in the MIDDLE of a chapter?
— Sep 02, 2025 10:31AM
Imogen
is 8% done
sorry, but authors truly need to stop using "you" in internal monologue. who the fuck is the "you" in this case? the easiest way to break immersion is by breaking the fourth wall, especially for no good reason. "i know what you're thinking" you know what WHO is thinking?? I am not a character in this book! shitty ass writing
— Sep 02, 2025 10:17AM
