Andrea’s Reviews > Savage Territory.: A Dark MM Prison Alpha Romance > Status Update
Andrea
is 37% done
There are so many inconsistencies. The timeline is out of whack. The cells the inmates are supposedly inhabiting and who they share with keeps changing. People were at an event but then they talk about how they heard about it instead, in the same chapter. And their first intimate scene was so confusing. Like, it came out of nowhere. 🤷🏼♀️
— Sep 02, 2025 09:15PM
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Andrea
is 79% done
Ok, now the gang leader, Rico, has miraculously come back to life? He was just killed in the last chapter…
Author….pull this and edit it now!!!! This has so many major discrepancies, it is hard to read. I should just DNF 🙄
— Sep 03, 2025 09:41PM
Author….pull this and edit it now!!!! This has so many major discrepancies, it is hard to read. I should just DNF 🙄
Andrea
is 48% done
Now we are hearing about a childhood trauma again. The MCs had a candid conversation about this in the previous chapter….
— Sep 02, 2025 11:03PM
Andrea
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Note to author: you need to do some major editing. Chapters one and two are a retelling of the same events told by each MMC….but they are extremely different. Like huh? Dante states Adrian comes into the chow hall at lunch and sits at the wrong table, so he goes and fetches him. Adrian states he doesn’t get chow until dinner time and he approaches Dante’s table and asks to sit.
— Sep 01, 2025 09:36PM
