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So like when does the Plot happen

Is there a plot?

It's meandering

We are WAY too far into the book for the author to just now be revealing that Brock has an undefined foreign accent. Also where could he possibly be from. He's called Brock.

I do think part of the issue with this aside from the inexcusable grammar issues is that the two guys read extremely similarly like they're both abusive weirdos

Inexcusable grammatical errors aside the narrator characters do at least have very clear voices

There are just generally way too many perspective characters

I know this guy is supposed to be unlikable but Jesus fucking Christ he SUCKS

I've neither read nor seen Gone Girl so I really hope the author doesn't expect me to know it. Also repeatedly bringing up real media ages pieces like this in a way that doesn't feel particularly intentional

"She worded the name"

What

Alright I am deeply confused by this book club set up

"A man knows when a woman wants him"

Yikes yikes yikes yikes yikes