Jasmine’s Reviews > Counting Thyme > Status Update

Jasmine
Jasmine is starting
I think this change is a good idea because it allows his true personality to show. It also makes more sense to have him gradually change his attitude around Thyme then to just suddenly change because of one event. Reading goal: 300 pages
Nov 14, 2016 02:21PM
Counting Thyme

flag

Jasmine’s Previous Updates

Jasmine
Jasmine is starting
If I were the author, I would definitely change the progression of Mr. Lipinsky's character. At first, he was very distant towards Thyme and then he suddenly became super nice towards her. I felt as if this character wasn't very strong. I would like to make the change for him to gradually warm up to her.
Nov 14, 2016 02:21PM
Counting Thyme


No comments have been added yet.