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Tori
is on page 107 of 576
reading but not relishing at the moment - think it’s getting its hooks into me but it’s slowish going. lots of words I feel are being overused which gets a bit annoying. also the use of ‘male’ and ‘female’ constantly drives me bananas. I get that it’s a *thing* but really wish it wasn’t.
— Sep 10, 2025 01:15PM
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Tori
is on page 422 of 576
Mixed feelings. story is decent, reading to find out what happens next, sometimes enjoying it but mostly being dragged out of any immersion kicking and screaming by prose that’s supposed to be lyrical, but is instead jarring. The repetition is so, so noticeable despite reading this in chunks of a couple fo chapters at a time. If anyone says the ‘organ in their chest’ to me I will scream. Loudly.
— Sep 15, 2025 12:45PM
