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Ashley
is on page 175 of 325
the main character is so stupid, she meets lord crane when shin is supposed to be talking to him and doesn't think how weird that is that a man is in two places at once until he attacks her?? like this is unforgivably stupid just to make the plot work I guess, the plot which is just all over the place
— Sep 10, 2025 03:44PM
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Ashley
is on page 196 of 325
"Suddenly she turns, a look of panic etched onto her grandmother mask."
that's just not true??
— Sep 16, 2025 03:19PM
that's just not true??
Ashley
is on page 142 of 325
I know this is a ya book but the dialogue is so juvenile! it's impossible to take the story seriously
— Sep 09, 2025 04:51PM
Ashley
is on page 109 of 325
"We can't be soul mates...," Shin says. His dark eyes lift, holding mine. "Because I don't have a soul."
man this is so corny. I really wanted to enjoy this book but I think I just can't handle ya anymore
— Sep 05, 2025 03:37PM
man this is so corny. I really wanted to enjoy this book but I think I just can't handle ya anymore
