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Extremely weird take on succubi tbh

Look I know it's a YA novel but I think you can say fucking instead of freaking actually

I forgot her sword talks man

Hey if pack animals go mad with the need to hunt when they first transform why the fuck do they not have an alpha just on standby on the stage

You cannot drop the existence of centaurs on me 39 pages into the second book

"Bro. Oh my God. My ovaries did somersaults at Lincoln’s nice gesture toward my little brother."

Right so I'm gonna go now

Also why do angels have credit cards still that's dumb

You cannot do a post apocalyptic story with Mastercard But Angels

Credit vouchers? Sure

Mastercards????

Also if the love interest is willing to put up his money for their $2000 entry fee why isn't he willing to put up his money for the mom's contract to free her

Like you clearly have enough money between you and your buddies to do that.

Like I know the mom's contract is more expensive by a lot but

Idk man just something about treating the school that kids who are literally enslaved to demons at as like "messed up and evil" as a result of the kids themselves and not the fucked up system they're forced into rubs me wrong

See this COULD have been an interesting commentary on like the failures of the state to provide for inner city public schools while simultaneously criticizing suburban public schools in nice areas being over funded but

That would require nuance