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This book is so heavy handed

This is someone's fantasy but it is NOT a romance, wtf???

What is happening. Why is this happening.

What child writes full dialouge in their journal. Why didnt the author just make these chapters actively in the past. Why is everything spoon fed.

Yeah I'm back at this, it's a train wreck I just can't stop watching.

15 minutes in and I thought this is Twilight on steroids, no vampires. MC goes on about how if a man joins her in the private space, she'll have to leave, but he's SO gorgeous. Immediate 'wow he's so special to me.' Also opening up with thinking about suicide to move to immediate flirting to proposition. This is so much.

Further in, I don't know if I'll continue because this is worse than most fanfiction.