Bookie’s Reviews > Entombed in Sin > Status Update
Bookie
is 3% done
“You’re so fucking pathetic” agreed. Why do authors write their FMC’s like they’ve had lobotomies? Off to a 1 star start.
— Sep 17, 2025 12:15PM
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Bookie
is 10% done
The dialogue makes my brain thump. The build up happens, then someone opens their mouth to say something, and it’s an utter let down. Oof! Wasted moments
— Sep 17, 2025 04:07PM