Angelina’s Reviews > Goldenhand > Status Update

About halfway through, and I'm really annoyed with how quickly we move from one story to the other. Staaaahhhhp. I feel like I'm experiencing whiplash from such quick, short changes or like I'm watching a ball move from side to side in a tennis game. It is seriously impacting my ability to fully enjoy this story. I hate it when writers try to get too clever with story structure.