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I love the characters, but this feels like a millennial trying to write as a gen x. "Breakfast at Tiffany's" was not a black-and-white movie. How did that get past editors? There were other references that were just wrong, but that one was the most annoying one.
— Sep 21, 2025 11:29AM
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Mona1007
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Another discrepancy. He unplugged the coil of his phone to stop the ringing? Uh, no, he didn’t. That wouldn't have stopped a thing.
— Sep 21, 2025 12:21PM
