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Were the authors similes so bad in book 1?
Drift like wayward spirits.... All logic and strict order. What?
My silence thunders. What?
Space, vast and terrible. Errr...
Carved from angry marble. Jesus Christ make it stop.
I never noticed how bad this was in book 1, it either slipped past me or the author has changed, for the worse.
— Sep 23, 2025 01:30AM
Drift like wayward spirits.... All logic and strict order. What?
My silence thunders. What?
Space, vast and terrible. Errr...
Carved from angry marble. Jesus Christ make it stop.
I never noticed how bad this was in book 1, it either slipped past me or the author has changed, for the worse.
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Not even the instigating event in this makes sense. He wins the battle, it explicitly tells you on the page they win by disabling with fake bombs. Then the other guy blows up his ship with a trick.... after he's already lost.
So the MC won, or it's a draw, but the author hopes you forget what HE tells you a few pages earlier? Sigh.
(As an aside, another over obvious "twist" like in book 1)
— Sep 23, 2025 04:26AM
So the MC won, or it's a draw, but the author hopes you forget what HE tells you a few pages earlier? Sigh.
(As an aside, another over obvious "twist" like in book 1)
