Jes ♡’s Reviews > Predestined > Status Update

There’s a certain suspension of disbelief that can apply to (romance) books with no fantastical elements. I think when there’s a fantasy element in place, or a dystopian one, there’s an expectation for the world itself to make sense. Even if that means I come across as overly critical, but then again, this book should be revised and republished because the basic elements are there!

Jaslyn had never felt emotion but she was nervous?

So Dank can adapt his speak to mimic those around him but his internal monologue still echoes that of a teenage boy and not an ancient deity.

Meet Joe Black…

Or was his name not originally on the agenda? Did someone maliciously add Wyatt’s name to Dank’s collection?

Oh, Wyatt…was his death really necessary? So young. And in love with Miranda.

When has Death ever taken an interest in an apparently ordinary human girl? Leif knew ever since the voodoo deal that Pagan was different, that Dank would see that but he dismissed his interest as benign instead of love?