Marilyn’s Reviews > Alchemised > Status Update

I just… don’t feel anything for any of these people. (Keep in mind I’ve made it to part 2 and her lost memories) I have no sympathy for Ferron and all he does is abuse Helena lmao. I know it’s still early but I’m not so sure this can stand on its own outside of the HP universe. I just don’t care about their cause or their struggles and none of it flows or makes sense because the foundation is so rocky.