Marilyn’s Reviews > Alchemised > Status Update

I just… don’t feel anything for any of these people. (Keep in mind I’ve made it to part 2 and her lost memories) I have no sympathy for Ferron and all he does is abuse Helena lmao. I know it’s still early but I’m not so sure this can stand on its own outside of the HP universe. I just don’t care about their cause or their struggles and none of it flows or makes sense because the foundation is so rocky.

really struggling with the magic system unfortunately the world building has just been a lot of info dumping 😭 the metals are connected to the planets connected to the soul and the gods???