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Inexcusable grammatical errors aside the narrator characters do at least have very clear voices

There are just generally way too many perspective characters

I know this guy is supposed to be unlikable but Jesus fucking Christ he SUCKS

I've neither read nor seen Gone Girl so I really hope the author doesn't expect me to know it. Also repeatedly bringing up real media ages pieces like this in a way that doesn't feel particularly intentional

"She worded the name"

What

Alright I am deeply confused by this book club set up

"A man knows when a woman wants him"

Yikes yikes yikes yikes yikes

But for a native English speaker there are some genuinely unforgivable grammatical issues in this that should never have made it to print

In my head this was a fantasy novel and apparently it's not so that's a little bit jarring but good gd this character sucks (I do think he's supposed to)

This guy is a dickhead