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But for a native English speaker there are some genuinely unforgivable grammatical issues in this that should never have made it to print
— Sep 27, 2025 09:07AM
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Corey
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Inexcusable grammatical errors aside the narrator characters do at least have very clear voices
— Jan 08, 2026 01:42PM
Corey
is on page 50 of 207
There are just generally way too many perspective characters
— Jan 04, 2026 01:26PM
Corey
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I know this guy is supposed to be unlikable but Jesus fucking Christ he SUCKS
— Dec 31, 2025 02:19AM
Corey
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I've neither read nor seen Gone Girl so I really hope the author doesn't expect me to know it. Also repeatedly bringing up real media ages pieces like this in a way that doesn't feel particularly intentional
— Nov 25, 2025 11:14PM
Corey
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Alright I am deeply confused by this book club set up
— Nov 09, 2025 05:18PM
Corey
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"A man knows when a woman wants him"
Yikes yikes yikes yikes yikes
— Oct 31, 2025 11:22AM
Yikes yikes yikes yikes yikes
Corey
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In my head this was a fantasy novel and apparently it's not so that's a little bit jarring but good gd this character sucks (I do think he's supposed to)
— Sep 27, 2025 09:06AM
Corey
is on page 20 of 207
"God forbid her confront"
Alright so that should say "god forbid she confront"
So
Not great
— Sep 27, 2025 09:06AM
Alright so that should say "god forbid she confront"
So
Not great
