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Becca
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This is a very cute cosy read for adults, I wouldn’t recommend it for a child because there are heavy sodomy references.
— Sep 27, 2025 02:17PM
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Becca
is on page 237 of 286
“There is too much guts!” Not “There are too many guts.” Again with incorrect use of singular and plurals. The story is cute though. The grammar just hurts my soul.
— Sep 30, 2025 12:03AM
Becca
is on page 224 of 286
Couple more typos, I can tell it was independently published. Needed a professional editor. Couple words misplaced, there’s a random T in the middle of a sentence, and use of “their” to describe one person. Their, they, them, is a plural, not singular. Pet peeve.
— Sep 29, 2025 04:05PM
Becca
is on page 168 of 286
Add alcoholism and grammar error, use of “their” a plural to describe one person is grammatically incorrect.
— Sep 27, 2025 06:50PM
