Jack’s Reviews > Never Flinch > Status Update

3 Plot too far fetched and forced

3. Seems like he's treading water and wasting time. not much happening

3. Like the idea of a churc paying someone to take out someone, but wish everyone wasn't so good at everything - at least the good guys

4 Things are culminating and coming together. feels a lot like the concert atthe end of mr mercedes

3. seems to be forcing a lot. the concert, Izzy pitching - everyone is too good at everything

4 . Interesting but seems scattered and all overthe place

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