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Emily is 82% done

I figured it out. The constant recapping of facts we already know is taking me out of the narrative when I’d rather just stay in the present moment with the main character.

— Sep 29, 2025 10:33AM

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Emily’s Previous Updates

Emily is 87% done

— Sep 29, 2025 01:01PM

Emily is 76% done

I maintain my assessment that I keep getting fed redundant information. It’s just like — why are we repeating this AGAIN?! Also couldddd really use some more world building. Like majorly. But the relationships with other characters are shaping out to be better and more interesting than before, as is the romance — way less Stockholmy so yay!

— Sep 28, 2025 10:04PM

Emily is 37% done

I feel like I keep getting given redundant information, the pacing is slow too and nothing feels quite developed yet.

— Sep 24, 2025 09:17PM

Emily is 25% done

This is setting up like a Stockholm syndrome book, I’m really hoping that that’s not how it turns out

— Sep 24, 2025 07:28PM

Emily is 15% done

— Sep 22, 2025 08:34PM