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AlrightOkay is 86% done

Got bored, skimmed to the break-up, and now we're in the grovel/make-up section. I feel like whoever broke Blake's POV here lost steam or lost inspiration cause it's so lacking. So much tell and so little show, but that's seems to be the flow of the book aside from the beginning.

— Oct 01, 2025 05:25AM

The Reality of Wanting Him (Love Without Labels, #1)

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AlrightOkay is 68% done

Also, 95% sure at least one of the authors writes gay fanfic. I'd bet money on it.

— Sep 30, 2025 11:53PM

AlrightOkay is 68% done

I feel like Blake's personality is very different from the beginning of the book? Some of it flows well with the story, but other parts feel kinda forced/unnatural. We're also about at the 70% mark where we typically get the argument and short break-up.

— Sep 30, 2025 11:52PM

AlrightOkay is 31% done

Henley mentioned 🕵🏾‍♀️ *suspicious*

— Sep 29, 2025 05:27PM

AlrightOkay is 16% done

This reads so info-dumpy. I need more dialogue and less "so this is what happened ".

— Sep 29, 2025 01:15PM

AlrightOkay is 6% done

I'm assuming both authors wrote a lot of fanfic. The prose just screams AO3 regular.

— Sep 29, 2025 11:56AM