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This book is just kinda cringe. Like, it’s written in the style of a YA with adult themes. I don’t know how to describe it. It feels uncomfortable with the tone not matching the words, or perhaps the other way around
— Oct 01, 2025 03:35PM
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Carmen
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I really don’t like the writing style. Like, the story concept it cool but the writing is very amateur. You can tell that this is a new writer, so it takes me out a little bit. I mean, the concept is what I enjoy but the actual writing style and choices are very average
— Sep 18, 2025 07:11PM
