Shauna’s Reviews > Storm of Chaos and Shadows > Status Update

Struggling to get through it. The editing really could be better. But action has finally picked up. Close to the end, though!

…then I’ve only got three more books to get through. 😅

It’s not bad but the world building is confusing. I can’t get a sense of what kind of world it is. At times it seems like typical medieval fantasy world, but then it’s traveling by horses and carriages and wagons, yet things like working plumbing/showers exist. There are cloaks and leather pants and fantasy garb, but also military boots and running shoes. It’s off-putting!

It’s a good story so far. The author is a good writer. However, I’m only 7 chapters in and I’ve seen numerous typos. And in one chapter, the youngest brother is seven, and one or two chapters later, it says he’s eight. Book could stand some better editing, TBH.