Heather’s Reviews > Companion to an Untold Story > Status Update

I might not finish this one. The concept is interesting but makes the story hard to follow/care about. The structure (it's set up like a reference guide in alphabetical order, with "chapters" like "Gun. See also: Weapon" or "Mattress") removes emotion from what should be an emotional, personal story. This feels like an unedited MFA thesis.

I don't know about this. It's a creative swing, for sure, but I don't know if it's connecting.