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I don't usually mind 1st person POV but there isn't a big enough difference between the two voices for me. Sometimes I forget whose narrating.
Also the italics for emphasis is over used. Especially when you also use italics for inner thoughts. I doubt that bold or underlying would work so how about just letting the reader determine the empathize words.
— Oct 05, 2025 09:05AM
Also the italics for emphasis is over used. Especially when you also use italics for inner thoughts. I doubt that bold or underlying would work so how about just letting the reader determine the empathize words.
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