J B’s Reviews > Midnights > Status Update

So far, I’ve noticed that turning on heels, smirking, and breath hitching appear every few pages—it’s hard not to unsee once you catch the pattern. I tend to blame the editors when repetition like that slips through. There’s also an almost obsessive focus on the way people breathe—every inhale, exhale, and pause is described in cinematic detail, but it rarely adds depth to the story.