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'Damn him and his cop brain...' This is not good. There's bad dialogue and a clunky exposition overload already in chapter one. I don't know how much I can take of this... one...
— Oct 07, 2025 03:24AM
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Liz
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Somewhere in Capter 7 and the clichés keep coming, thick & fast:
'I've been in this business twenty years, and I've never seen anything like it' ...
...I have. ;)
— Oct 08, 2025 01:05AM
'I've been in this business twenty years, and I've never seen anything like it' ...
...I have. ;)
