Julie T.’s Reviews > Paradise-1 > Status Update

Wow! What editor approved this trash for print.

We have the most dramatic of scenes & I want to burst out laughing. The dialogue and the situation are absolutely ludicrous!!! "His body was strewn across multiple decks. And the doctor has part of it in his pocket." The book is just moronic. It's like it was written by someone with half a brain! Forget about Petrova's inability to stay in one character or absolute lack of any tension, the whole "plot" is trash!

When rescuing an injured crewmate from an insane AI do make sure to stop and explain your dastardly plan in minute detail!

Petrova is one of absolutely dumbest characters!

Petrova, who's been shown to be not too smart already, is giving obvious solutions to Parker! If you are going to imply that your characters are smart, you should really make them act and do smart things.