Julie T.’s Reviews > Paradise-1 > Status Update

Wow! What editor approved this trash for print.

We have the most dramatic of scenes & I want to burst out laughing. The dialogue and the situation are absolutely ludicrous!!! "His body was strewn across multiple decks. And the doctor has part of it in his pocket." The book is just moronic. It's like it was written by someone with half a brain! Forget about Petrova's inability to stay in one character or absolute lack of any tension, the whole "plot" is trash!

Petrova is one of absolutely dumbest characters!

Ah yes, the bestest of plans - send 3 fuck ups with no info to save humanity where over a 100 previous ships failed. Wow! Petrova is not the only dumb one, Lang is too!

Petrova, who's been shown to be not too smart already, is giving obvious solutions to Parker! If you are going to imply that your characters are smart, you should really make them act and do smart things.