Ellie’s Reviews > Hold Me Like a Grudge > Status Update

Struggling with this so far. I really want to like it, but it feels like an unfinished draft. There is a lot of telling not showing, things are happening at an insane pace, people are having major realizations about their sexuality just casually and then having it not mentioned again for ages (even though it is very pertinent to the story). I also do not love present tense writing.