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The style is somewhat hard to get into, it’s very stop go and allot of information gets repeated. I also noticed since inconsistencies that bothered me. When she was a mermaid with a tail,a shark dove for legs she didn’t have yet; the dogs nose went from being black to pink; and one minute she’s naked asking the sea witch if she need anything to blend in and then she has armor on that’s being ripped off.
— Oct 07, 2025 06:05PM
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I’m enjoying it but I don’t agree with the protagonist at all. The sailing and boat descriptions were confusing to me and I didn’t get the visual. I found it weird that she just didn’t have a voice and then fully spoke fluent English. It would have been more interesting if Celeste was super intelligent.
— Oct 20, 2025 02:39PM

