Veronica’s Reviews > Mate > Status Update

Both better than some of Hazelwood's previous efforts, and also displaying some of her worsts writing habits. A selection:
MMC's eyes are described as not grey or black or something in between. Like tar.
The repeated triplet joke coda, 'I could be dead like I'm a corpse, a ghost, a happily knitting spinster!' Cute the first few times annoying at number 80.