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I created "obnoxious writing style" and "authors to avoid" shelves for this book.
A. The overuse of splitting sentences up by word per line.
B. I can appreciate a well-placed explicative, but when *fuck* is all you use to describe extreme emotions, it gets old, fast.
C. Raeve has a habit of picking at the skin near her fingernails. We get it. Like Celaena picking at her nails with a dagger. Stop reminding me.
— Oct 09, 2025 08:48AM
A. The overuse of splitting sentences up by word per line.
B. I can appreciate a well-placed explicative, but when *fuck* is all you use to describe extreme emotions, it gets old, fast.
C. Raeve has a habit of picking at the skin near her fingernails. We get it. Like Celaena picking at her nails with a dagger. Stop reminding me.
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