lady_davidson’s Reviews > Trial of the Sun Queen > Status Update

DON’T WORRY EVERYONE! Even in Nadir’s chapters, NOSTRAZA IS STILL MENTIONED 😹😹😹 I fucking canNOT.

If she’s not mentioning Nostraza, she’s mentioning Willow and Tristan. If she’s not mentioning Willow and Tristan, she’s fighting back tears. If she’s not fighting back tears, she’s snorting. And if she’s snorting, it’s derisively.

This is fucking annoying.

Chapter twenty was a waste of time and it felt too hurried. It felt like it had a very “teenage fanfic no one understands me” tone and yeah, no. Not a fan.

STOP. MENTIONING. NOSTRAZA. IT HAS BEEN WEEKS. STOP COMPARING EVERYTHING TO IT. GFDI.

The overly-descriptive flowery crap is getting old too. Like shut up and be in the moment. Not every paragraph needs to be some overly-described revelation of something. Less is more.

If she’s not mentioning Nostraza, she’s mentioning herself “fighting back tears.”

HWAT is HWITH this HINCESSANT REPETITION!?!

The fucking prison was mentioned again and now I am screaming. Can you hear it?

“He’s just a male and can’t control his actions.”
Ooooo loving how it’s a woman’s responsibility to answer for a man’s actions — EVEN WHEN HOMIE IS THE KING HIMSELF.
That’ssssssss what? Misogynistic? Sexist? Every day life I guess?
That was just a disappointing line to read.

For some girl that claims to be a hardened bitch… she sure does feel the need to cry a lot.

Omg I’m gunna lose my mind.
SHE LIVED IN NOSTRAZA AND IT SUCKS! MOVE 👏🏼 ON 👏🏼
If it’s mentioned past page 150, I’m going to scream.