LinaVer’s Reviews > The Quiet Flame > Status Update
LinaVer
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It's book needs editing. The verbs in the first chapter are written in different tenses, making it difficult to understand whether the action takes place in the present or in the character's memories. This kind of jumping around throws you off track when reading.
— Oct 11, 2025 04:47AM
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“I hope to remember who I was before this began”
— Oct 13, 2025 11:24PM
