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3 separate stories; alternate storylines where Jane is married as the remaining daughters cope with her absence.
1st story starts out interesting and with some promise, until the author gets bored and starts just lazily “telling” instead of SHOWING. The story is supposed to be about Jane being unhappy — turns that everyone’s life is ruined except for Charlotte’s!
2nd story is violent so far, concerning
— Oct 11, 2025 03:01PM
1st story starts out interesting and with some promise, until the author gets bored and starts just lazily “telling” instead of SHOWING. The story is supposed to be about Jane being unhappy — turns that everyone’s life is ruined except for Charlotte’s!
2nd story is violent so far, concerning
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Lit Reader
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Book 2 is a cynical story of a bitter, violent Lizzy who lashes out at her own disappointment with her family. She is cruel and leaves Longbourn. All the sisters have boring, comfortable, dispassionate fates, and yet Lizzy gets her Darcy in the end (in a boring, second-best sort of way!).
I am afraid of what the third book will bring !
— Oct 12, 2025 09:52AM
I am afraid of what the third book will bring !
