Sierra Nathans Lightner’s Reviews > Under the Yule Moon > Status Update

Okay I just finished chapter 14 and I realized that this author uses a lot of sentences like “not this, but this…” and it feels like they are trying to be very poetic about their writing but it’s too much. In just the last 3-4 pages of this chapter, the author used the “not this, but this” bit 7 times and it’s making it difficult to focus on what’s actually happening.