Kim!’s Reviews > What I Did for a Duke > Status Update

Why do so many authors wait til 80% thru the book to suddenly realize they forgot to give any depth to the MMC, then make a mad scramble to try to make them relatable. I guess it's better than nothing.

I hate them both so much. I hope they jump off a cliff together. The MMC because he's a Mary Sue prick and interchangeable with about 5000 other MMCs. The FMC because she is such a shit friend while being whiny and hypocritical about it. Harry and Millicent need to leave her toxic ass in the dust.