James’s Reviews > Shards of Earth > Status Update

I’ve heard great things about AC and certainly get what people like about his writing. He writes in the POV of his characters, however, there is an independent narrators voice on top. Unfortunately, I’m discovering that AC’s style comes with a healthy amount Tell (Show and Tell) and for me this pushes the reader out of the immersion. I’m also finding the characters 2 dimensional and I’ve not connected.