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Mike Finn
is 16% done
I'm two chapters in. This isn't working for me yet. The story is told from Sebastian's point of view. His internal monologue delivered in a brusque staccato that I find annoying, mostly because it's so disjointed. It doesn't help that I find Sebastian hard to like. He comes across as smug and complacent.
Still, he's just found the dead body. Maybe things will pick up as the investigation gets underway.
— Oct 15, 2025 04:20PM
Still, he's just found the dead body. Maybe things will pick up as the investigation gets underway.
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Mike Finn
is 25% done
The writing got a little better but I still setting this book aside. I don't want to spend any more time with Sebastian Synard. The man presses too many of my buttons. That probably means he's well-written. It definitely means I'm ditching the book.
— Oct 16, 2025 02:15AM
