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Can we talk about the dress for a minute. Come on. F*ing really?? NOBODY tells her to wear red? They all grimace and act like she’s the a$$hole when they know she knows nothing.
Then they all make a big deal about it?? It was your job to tell her. This is terrible writing. Find something real for them all to judge her. We can obviously see who the bad guys are. ITS BLATANTLY OBVIOUS so Luther tell her “wear red
— Oct 18, 2025 10:58AM
Then they all make a big deal about it?? It was your job to tell her. This is terrible writing. Find something real for them all to judge her. We can obviously see who the bad guys are. ITS BLATANTLY OBVIOUS so Luther tell her “wear red
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Melanie
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Make it make sense.
The house Corbois.. I’m assuming are all cousins and some how related .. and they have a private party for each other and dress as naked as possible? No shirt with chains and leather straps??
I don’t know about you but my family dinners are ugly sweaters and sweatpants.
— Oct 18, 2025 02:37PM
The house Corbois.. I’m assuming are all cousins and some how related .. and they have a private party for each other and dress as naked as possible? No shirt with chains and leather straps??
I don’t know about you but my family dinners are ugly sweaters and sweatpants.
Melanie
is on page 87 of 610
Omg. Ok you know that SJM book where she goes off to learn how to use her magic and dude is a lion? And an a$$hole but he teaches her with aggression and male toxicity?? Yeah. Chapter 8 just plagiarized the sh*t outta that. 🙄 Grt your own ideas.
I can’t. I don’t know if I’ll finish this.
— Oct 16, 2025 03:29PM
I can’t. I don’t know if I’ll finish this.