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Conflict: The conflict in my story is character vs character. I believe this because Thomas is in a fight with a girl he could trust named Teresa. He is still making up his mind to trust her or not because she was fighting him.
Oct 20, 2025 11:22AM
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Connor Patterson
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Prediction: I will predict that Thomas will lead his group to the end of the scorch trials. I think this because on page 177 it says, "Thomas, you have to get us out of here, lead us to heaven to cure us." I think this foreshadows that the whole book is about Thomas leading his group out of the scorch trials.
Oct 13, 2025 11:13AM
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Point of View: The point of view in my book is 3rd person omniscient. I know this because on page 33 it says, "Thomas felt a headache forming behind his eyes." The reason why this is the point of view, is because the narrator knows his feelings because it says a headache is forming.
Oct 06, 2025 11:22AM
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Connor Patterson
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Protagonist: The story is mainly focused on Thomas who is a brave teenager, who is dedicated to getting him and his friends home. On page 133 it says, "Thomas approached the old scary man bravely." He loves to be very modest and he got brainwashed and he can speak to a girl telepathically.
Sep 29, 2025 11:27AM
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Connor Patterson
Connor Patterson is finished
The setting in my book takes place in the scorch trials. The scorch trials are the trials that the creators set up for the gladers to make it through to survive. In the scorch trials it is very hot, on page 91 it says, "the sun would give you a second degree sun burn if we step outside." Once the sun sets they could finally move outside the hallway.
Sep 22, 2025 11:32AM
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