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Anissa
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I picked this up for the novelty. i don't read a lot of romance, but i do love a dystopia. i've some peeves already (hand-waving world building, i see you made it!), though. the fmc is 27 years old & reads like a teenager. the only way the writer seems to be able to express pensiveness in this character is by biting her lips. her poor chewed-up lips! get her some balm & an actual character trait!
— Oct 21, 2025 05:37PM
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Anissa
is on page 263 of 416
1st third was repetitive. middle third has finally got to the point. neither mmc has depth enough to care much abt them as characters. fmc doesn't have enough depth herself to carry them. author has offered up gregory & nora as characters with more depth. one character is so ignored, i'm sure they're a prime mover, probably in subsequent books. world-building is still hugely lacking. overall, prose reads very basic.
— Oct 23, 2025 03:09AM
